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Everyone hsa their own life, and everyone's life is limit. So how to make our life more meaningful? Some people think the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it. Is it true? Maybe it with some reason. But do we just need to do something outlast to spend our life? No, I think it's wrong. Our life should include all kinds of deffirent things. If we only do something outlast, our life become boring and meaningless. I think we should do these to make our more meningful. First, we should have goals and make some plans to achieve the goals. Secondly, we should have our own belief and principle. We should know what is right and what is wrong, and try not to make mistakes. Thirdly, we should do something meaningful and useful. We can help others who need our help and we can try our best to make contributions to our country and society. I think if we can finish these requests, our life will become more wonderful and meaningful.
