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I have many friend.do you know who they are?are they my pet?no.are they my classmates?no. let me tell you:they are my favourit book. I like books very much.i like reading science book,cartoonbook so on.not only let me know how wonderful the word is but also teach me how to be a good person in the society,they give me great pleasure. I love books!