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Ben is my best friend.He loves sports very much.He is good at Math and English.He is a good boy.He always helps other students.Now,he is the tallest in our class.In 15 years’ time,he will be taller and heavier.He will be goodlooking .He will be 195 centimetres tall.He will weigh 76 kilograms.He will not wear galsses.He will possibly be a policeman or a fireman.He says that this only is a dream.He will try to make his dream come true.