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I have a good and tall friend, whose name is Li Hua. He is a 13-year-old boy. He studies in Guangming Middle School. He is in Class 5, Grade 1. He studies hard all the time. He is good at maths and physics. So he often helps him to learn English. We learn from each other and help each other, which makes us become good friends. He is very clever because he always gets good goals in the exam. I am lucky to have so clever a friend. We will be good friends forever.