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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
As the old said,without dream,there is no direction.Different people have different dreams.Therefore,I am an ordinary person,and I have an ordinary dream. A few years ago,I am fond of my English teacher who is beautiful and kind.She speaks English very fluent as well as her voice is very pleasant.At that time,I want to be an English teacher as she as.I became interested in English.Interests is the best teacher.Over the years,I have been trying to learn English.I am crazy about English.Where there is a will,there is a way.I can speak and write in English.What is more,in my senior middle school,in order to improve my English level,I always took part in a variety of English contests.And now,I still studying English very hard. I know that it is difficult to make my dream come true.However,I am not afraid of difficulty.In a word,as long as I live,I won't give up my dream.I believe,I can fly in the sky.
