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I feel very happy to hear that you will come to visit China and especially to my hometown. I would like to introduce you some interesting places where attract most tourists or somewhere I think special. The first place is Guiyuansi, a huge temple with beatiful garden and thousands statues of monk with different expressions in their face. The interesting thing you can do here is to count the statue from which you like , the number of you age, then that statue is the one can tell your character and fate from his expression of face, like happiness or sadness. The next place is the city's musical showed in a theatre of Gunshi. It is China's Broad Way. At last, I hope you have a happy and safe trip in China.
