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文中词汇表达灵活性要提高，希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
To be a smart consumer As a student,we should do is saving money as soon as possible.I believe it is a good way to group-buy deals. Now,we can make less money,so parents have to give us support in economy. It is reported that some student spend too money on buying clothes and amusement. In my opinion,this is a bad thing.However,how can we do for it?For instance,a clothes we buy it need spare 10 dollars.but,wo need pay 6 dollars for it if we choose group-buy deals.Thus,we can save 4 dollars. Rejecting to over-consuming,saving money as soon as possible.
