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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33615
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

To be a smart consumer As a student,we should do is saving money as soon as possible.I believe it is a good way to group-buy deals. Now,we can make less money,so parents have to give us support in the economy. It is reported that some students spend too money on buying clothes and amusement. In my opinion,this is a dreadful thing.However,how can we do for it?For instance,a clothes we buy it need spare 10 dollars.But,we need pay 6 dollars for it if we select group-buy deals.Thus,we can save 4 dollars. Rejecting to over-consuming,saving money as soon as possible.

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