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2011年8月27日雅思写作真题:政府是否应向当地电影业提供经济支持

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Nowadays, people all over the world prefer to watch foreign films much more than the locally produced ones. Why is this the case? Should the government give financial support to the local film industry?

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希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;采用了一些简单的从句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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nowadays it is common for young people to follow some fasion trends in watching some foreign films .so there is a brief that foreign movies has been tremendous growth .more and more chinese children and adults by liked very much. there are many reasons why i support this opioion,and i would explore a feqw of vthe most important obes here.to sratr with,foreign country is becomming a more and more important country in tghe world,especially culture industry.learning it is a very practical interest and increased the opportunities. we sjould realize that there is sth we can learn from the foreign culture.for example respect for the importance of cukturaol industry. the increasing popularity of the it has become haed ro stop.we also develop the culture of ourv own .only in way can we have a bright future .we have every reason to believe that we never stop moving we could make progress

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