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小学三年级英语作文:My school

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:55浏览次数:5963
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用英语描述下自己的学校,字数在100字以内。
用户的作文(系统评分57.5分
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作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。

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My school is very beautiful. It is in Henson, near the Qiandeng Lake. Do you know it? It is Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I like my school very much.   There is a big playground in my school. We have P.E. class on the playground and we often play Our teaching building has five floors. My classroom is on the fifth floor. It is big and clean. The computer rooms are on the third floor. There is a library on the second floor. There are many books in the library. I often read books here. There are some music rooms and art rooms in the teaching building, too. The teachers in my school are very kind . The students are very polite and smart. I am happy in my school.

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