2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

it is very difficult to tell you the truth.life is so short and you need are so much.for me ,just care about now ,done with you.Today I shed my old skin which hath, too long, suffered the bruises of failure and the wounds of mediority. Today I am born anew and my birthplace is a vineyard where there is fruit for all. Today I will pluck grapes of wisdom from the tallest and fullest vines in the vineyard,for these were planted by the wisest of my profession who have come before me,generation upon generation.