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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3374
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

It Pays to Be Honest Honesty has been considered as a good virtue since ancient times, and it has been considered as a basic principle for a man's existence. A man who is honest always acquires trust and friendship. As one old Chinese saying goes, a man without honesty will not stand up on the society. It's so important that we should be honest. however, nowadays, with the rapid development of social economy, the phenomena of dishonesty can be seen everywhere. Some students cheat in exams to get a good score, which makes harmful influence on other students. Some businessmen make fake commodities in order to get money, which does harm not only to consumers but also to themselves. Although they can get money temporarily, they violate their inner heart, and they break the market rules at the same time. Once being found, they will lose all their money and other people's trust. Therefore, we should remember it pays to be honest. We ourselves and our children should be honest.

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