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In my part,saving is a good humanity that we all should study .I hold the opinion that we students had better save money as often as possible To start with ,why i choose to save money is that money is not available to the poor.They probably are shorten in food 、clothes、houeses、books and so on in somewhere of the world All that just because they don't have enough money . Next,as a student,most of us are not able to make a living for ourselves ,relying on our parents.since the money is not we earn ,we have no reason to use it uncortrolledly and uncarefully we are only the user of it ,not owner. At last,saving is the traditional moral of chinese people.Not only can it rear our excellent habit ,but also make us a man out of the unconsiderable youth .In our daily life,there a great deal of chances to save money such as,collect all kinds of coupons, look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel,buy clothesin a sale. Do a small pecie of cake and you will have all forest.
