2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

As the culture developing,more and more museums are opened for free.I think it's reasonable to free admission to museum.First of all,we citizens have a good place to relaxed ourselves while w can also learn something.Further more,stuff on museum must attain culture and knowledge which broden our horizens,it may also improve people's personal level. However,problems are existing.The amount of broken and stolen treasure has risen,which damaged the protection of rare treasure. In my view,free admission to museum is totally a good thing to our students,we can access to the humen's treasure without spending too much,after all,we don't have much money as a student,so i am a supporter.