2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

As the culture developing,more and more museums are opened for free.I suppose that it's reasonable to free admission to museum.First of all,we citizens have a good place to relief the measure while we can also learn something.Further more,the exhibits in museum must attain culture and knowledge which broaden our horizons,it may also improve people's personal quality. However,problems are existing.The amount of broken and stolen treasure has risen,which make it a more difficult to protect the rare treasure. In my view,free admission to museum is totally benifit to our students,we can have an access to the human's treasure without spending too much,after all,we don't have much money as a student,so i am a supporter for this policy.