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2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:22浏览次数:6152
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题目 Free admission to museums
要求
1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?
2.也会带来一些问题
3.你的看法?
字数:120 满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As the culture developing,more and more museums are opened for free.I suppose that it's reasonable to free admission to museum.First of all,we citizens have a good place to relief measure while we can also learn something.Further more,the exhibits displayed in museum must attain culture and knowledge which broaden our horizons,it may also improve people's personal quality. However,problems always exists.The amount of broken and stolen treasure has risen,which make it more difficult to protect the rare treasure. In my view,free admission to museum is totally benefit to our students,we can have an access to the human's treasure without spending too much,after all,we don't have much money as a student,so i am a supporter of this policy.

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