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假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩得很快乐。请以My happy weekend 为题，根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
5. 大家都渡过了一个快乐的周末。
4. 不得用真实姓名和学校名称。
文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。
I can't wait to tell you the more detail on that day. At eight o'clock on last Sunday morning,We get together in front of our school gate.We set out after everyone arrived.We all like riding,so we went there by bike.It takes about 30 minutes to get there .When we arrived everyone was excited,because the view in our eyes was so beautiful!Some people took photos,some people played game together.We talked,song and laughed.After some time,we felt hungry,then we took out our food and had a picnic.We didn't feel any tiredness and we forgot all of annoy.We are had a happy weekend.It will be hardly forgotten.
