高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past, my hometown was arounded by many green trees, the river was very clean, the fish was played in it, house was simple, and the street was narrow, people worked and the life was poor. now, there are many buildings and factories. plenty of cars run on the street, industry develops but the enviorment is worse, trees are decline,and the fish diappears, it is important to deal with the enviroment.