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i am crazy about my school and prepare for buy some cherish gifts for it to express my teachrs which are too impressive to be forgotten.i think rthat is way the school is always everybody,s ideal place to study.as a young students, i am addicted to buy alll kinds of things to donation the disaster area including school supplies and living things.so a =s time goes by,it has become my hobby
