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作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用学术词汇；采用了一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
he is outgoing boy and have board interest so he likes take an active part in school activities.he is ready to help people whey they are in need.he has good academic record and and helps me in study.he can take an active part in social practice to exercise self .i am going to give him much schiool supplies to express my thanks .so school supplies would be our first choice
