2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦94:年级家长会

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being to take some exams lead to she often under the much pressure which make she felt upset .as a result of too much homwwork so she no time to pay a visit to the museum .she expecially like to see fossils and ancient painting exhibits.she think these kinds of things are the essential part of culture.the teacher told her much relaxation methods such as communication with parents or friends often can make her pleasure and totally relaxed .she have already know the vital of time now so she can hand in her homework in time.learning the how to balancve the wrk and study by inquire the teacher seems to be best choice.