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①温州是一个美丽的城市，位于中国的东部（in eastern China），气候温暖（warm）, 准备轻便的衣服。（light clothes）②有很多美丽的风景，比如雁荡山（Yandang Moutains）和南麂岛（Nanji Island）等。③ 靠近大海，可以品尝海鲜（seafood）④交通方便⑤这里的人很友好,并且你很愿意做她的导游。
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Wenzhou is a excellent city which is located inthe east of the china .the climate is warm so u get there u should ready to wear light clothes .there are a lot of beautiful scenery in there such as Yandang mountain (Yandang Moutains) and the south Island suede (Nanji Island),they are close to the sea and u can taste the seafood .u don,t worry about the traffic in here which is convenience to ge to there so as weel as the peiople there .u are willing to do her tour guide
