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Flus pread easily in the crowd .if u have the flu, we should go to see a doctor or take some medicine.if we usually pay attention to health and from the good habits and customs ,we don,t have to worry about the flu. we should inddor clean and often open the window and can smoothly aie change.eat more fruits and vegetables as much as possible.don,t go to the crowd places and do more sports if we can.that is bacause they can fit us.a lot of people,such as students should much more oppoirtunities to go to there .
