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it is quite pleasent ,i think.four seasons are clearlydistinguished.spring and autumn is mild,summer is hot ,winter is very cold and there are frequent snows .i do like brezzy and sunny days.i think that,ms because i am quite an outdoor person and this type of weather is the best for some outdoor sports .