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Kitty is my classmate which has a pair of big eyes and round face and she is the tallest in the class. She was very generous (fashion) to a friend and willling to share everything toi her friend expecially others need help them. she has a good sense of humor and often tell jokes to make them happy and never bored with her.she can keep a secret for his friend .she is true frind.i certainanly do like her.althrough we are all living in a world where competition is getting fiercer.just as the old saying,survial of the fittest.i make some egffort to become her friend .i believe our friendship will last forever .
