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Breakfast is very important for students; Many students don't eat breakfast to go to school, which is harmful to our health .. Food can provide us energy. If we don't eat breakfast, we can't listen attentively If do not have enough energy,; we will not be able to build our bodies, keep vitality. So, eat breakfast again to go to school, it is very important.
