2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦101:野餐活动

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we will organize an picnic at the xishan mountain at 8,00 morning on sunday.we will gather at the school gate .i am capable and reliable to climp the mountain.i wish we can begin to climb the mountain at 9.00,when 11 we can eat lunch at the top of the mountain .after lunch,we can make a schedule and follow it .in this way i know how things stand and feel comfortable of handing them.i can ,t bear the life without plans.besides,making a plan in advance helps me save time and increase effiency.we reture the school at 4,30