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in my daily life i often walk to school on foot.it is like a reminder or something .it can tell me it can build us body and good for our lung and heart.when i take my time to do it except when u got sth urgent to do u can take bus or car for school .such as having a flighr or a train to catch, a metting or date things to gor for.just imagine how wonderful to walk to school if u school is near to u home.i don,t avoid any error in time
