2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

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many kinds of ad seems great in surface but it can influence the audience to see some instructive programs.when u see some bravo programs the arise suddenly ad interpect the enthusiasm of the audience .althrough some ad get close to real life but in order to sell the product some sellers exxaggerate the quality of the roal the products.it means p unable to truly understable the product.whenp see some poor ad .they may feel more stress .they can,t find a way to relax throgh the tv which many progran are full of ad .althrough it is very popular in our daily life.u can see ad everywhere on the radio ,on tv .