2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(74):课外活动

学术词汇使用熟练，不过请注意单词拼写的检查；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Television can obtain information. it is convenient to understand the world, and the attain knowledge,.but see more affect vision, delaying study, etc. i guess there are various reasons for p to watch tv.for emample,some p want to know a foreign country through tv instead of for sightseeing in person.and experiecing dofferent cultures and food.however.some p through tv attend a trade fair and have an international conference