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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8980
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

As a saying goes,it is unwise to judge people by his appearance.I think what we should know is that we should go beyond other's looks and focus on other aspects.And my reasons are as follows. First of all,everything that we have,especially appearance ,are given by our parents.In other hand,if you see a person with ugly appearance,you never know what happened on him.So we shouldn't judge people by his appearance.What's more,there's no doubt that many people who have good appearance achieve nothing,while others without good appearance make successful events.Last but no least,it's a fact that a good appearancecan leave others a good impression,but when we make friends with someone,it's necessary to take the personal character into account. As it metioned above, appearance doesn't tell us anything about a person.What matters most to a person isn't his appearance but internal quality.So only by taking time to get along with a person can we really know him.

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