作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文中句子偏简单,可增加从句使用量;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Hello, everyone! I've got something important to tell you. An open English class will be held in the lecture room next Monday. It will be given by Mr. Chen. All the other English teachers will be there for it. Every one of our class must do the following things well: Clean the lecture room and keep it in good order. Get everything ready before class. Don't be late and better be there before 8:30 a.m.Listen to the teacher carefully. Put up your hands before you want to speak. Be polite to all the teachers