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题目要求：
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解：
题义理解上有那么一点难！但是总之都跟广告有关。
可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。
It is common these days that people perchuse things advertised in the commercials. but dose this mean that advertisement can manipulate people's buying behaviors totally? personally, i do not think advertisement has such a big magic. admittiedly, advertisements do gave people a influence on people's decisions when they buy products. between a product always seen on the screen and a product with a bland you have never seen, probably most people will choose the more familar one. besides, commercilas always describe a good life, which really can creat a illusion that pople are longing for. and since it always promote a mass publication,
