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题目要求：
Higher education can be funded in several ways including the following three:
1. All costs are paid by the government.
2. All costs are paid by the student.
3. All costs are paid by the student using loans from the government that must be repaid after graduation. Discuss the benefits of each option. Which is the best one?
题目讲解：
语料库：
1. the higher education = college education 高等教育
2. the students’ loans = educational loans 学生贷款
3. work one’s way through college 半工半读
4. apply for the scholarship 申请奖学金
5. potential risk of refusing to repaying the loans 拒绝还款的风险
6. impose much pressure upon a nation economically 增加了政府的经济压力
7. come from the remote rural areas
8. subsidize = sponsor = finance 资助
9. economic support 经济支持
10. finish college education 完成高等教育
11. resolve more pressing social issues 解决更加紧迫的民生问题
12. stimulate one’s study motivation under the pressure of …… 在压力下激发学习动力
13. cherish the learning opportunities 珍惜学习的机会
14. face the risk of dropping out of school 面对辍学的风险
15. embark on part-timers 做兼职工作
希望作者在学术词汇的使用，单词拼写方面都能能更熟练一些；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
the issue whether the higher education are paid by the govrment or students or even both.some p think that all costs are paid by the goverment .wherease others thibk that all paid by the students.undeniably,these are points in both sides of the arguments. there is no doubt that it is significant for all the students all over the world. there is no doubted that students in the university are not only acquire specialised knowledge systematically,but also received strict training in terms of critical thinking.in this case ,those who attend university are morelikely to have an edge over hjob hunters .so the students accept the college education can appply for the scholarship to finish collge education.if the tuition are free the students may not cherish the lwarning the learning opportunities and face the risk of dropping out of school . to tracl=kle the problem of who should paid the tuitioin,every possible solution should be tried. to sum up.this disturbing problem is attributed to many factors and i believe with the joint effort from individual and the g.it can be eventually resoled.that is ti say as for students coming from the rich families it is quite reasonable for them to pay all the tuition fees.yet,on thepart of those poverty stricken and proinent students ,their college ed=ucation could be resolved in several ways,such as goverment aid ,students ,s loans schoalship and parrt time job opportunities provied by the universities.
