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目前，我国实施城市化进程中，给从乡村（镇）迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony 发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。
总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。
(可能用到的词：First, Second, Third，In conclusion)
Tony
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Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do.
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It takes time and patience(耐心). I hope you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段。
Dear Tony, There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some（public） places where there are lots of kids. You could try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.（you can try making friends at churches(教堂) too if you go to church on Sundays.）In conclusion(What's mre),try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don't try so hard. It takes time and patience(耐心). I hop you will find a best friend soon! Yours, Know
