2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(28):战胜失败

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

first of all, i have a guided dod who is a god especially trained to guided a blind person .he is like good friends of mine.i walk with the dog one day.when i saw an blind people want to cross the street .i told my dog which can let him know my point.he lead the blind cross the street.i hope that such things happen a lot .