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拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The standard of people's life is growing a remarkable and rapid change with the development of economic. There is a large stride in terms of traffic methods, such as taking a bus or subway. We can also drive a car which is more convenient and time-saving compared with riding a bike or walking. All of these transports help us make a significant improvement of our lives. However, something is paradoxical about the way in which we need these tools to make our lives more convenient as our lives becoming more hectic, yet we find sometimes there are our burden. There are some traffic problems such as the air pollution, the traffic jams, and so on. Have you ever lost your temper and become whilst driving when you were in a hurry to a significantly important meeting or something else? Or have you ever had no place to stand or felt no fresh air to breath when you are taking a bus or subway? Yes, I have. In some big cities, both of the ground and under-ground traffic pressure are heavy due to the unbalance between the number of transports and the number of people especially during rush hours. What's more, the serious air pollution occurs following with increase of cars running in the street. There will be some health problems in our bodies if we are living in the polluted air for a long time. And there will be some physical and mental stress if we are facing with the traffic jam which makes us distress and angry. How to deal with these traffic problems? We need to drive cars as less as possible despite you are in emergency which is helpful to reduce the air pollution. And maybe the companies should adjust their working time so that the employees can choose different time to take the buses and subways.
