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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(29):礼品

发布时间:2014-04-29 17:34浏览次数:348
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请根据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于50。礼品的名称可以使用汉语拼音。
Your Australian friend Jim has been in Beijing for quite a few days. He is leaving tomorrow. You have bought him a gift, which is typical of Chinese culture. Now please tell him why you have chosen this gift, and what special cultural meaning it has.
Hi, Jim, here’s a gift for you..
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文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;请注意积累词汇量,拼写错误比较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

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i will give u an book called analects with lots of classical chinese in it .it stand for the 5 thousand years of chinese culture .it help u know our chinese ,s great culture .it is the national treasure in china.it belong to the intangible cultural heritage .they can open u eyes and widen u horizons to know the chinese.as for u ,with the help of the book can meet u requirements to learn chinese.u can make friends in the book through reading.i still remember i first reading it.it can enhacing the public,s understanding and engrement with it

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