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Recently,it was reported that one college students hired a cleaner to do laundry for them and paid for the labor raised a debate among society whether they should do like this.However,different people support different view.But personally,I absolutely againt that behavior. This behavior pruduce no good benefit on us.A part of people hold the opinion that it can save a lots of time for students to do some more meaningful things,instead of meaningless laundry.But a majority of people assuem that compus students are suppused to do basic cleaning on their own.I cannot agree with the most people more,for they are too mature to be independent.College students ought to develop various kinds of abilities,especially in thoes basic living skiis.Furthermore,there are a great deal of other time for us to do other thing,excepe learning major knowledge.I definitely ensure it cannot bring about negative impacts. In conclusion,not only should college student study their major knowledge,but also they have to master living skill.The first step to be successful is that we can take care of ourselves.
