小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

I have a good friend.she is a beautiful girl.she has long black hair,two big black eyes and a red mouth.her voice is batter.she is good at singing; she is a clever girl.she likes reading books,palying computer games and chess.she is alos nice.she offen helps us.our classmates like her very much.