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The excess packaging The excess packaging, to describe it simply, means a number of meterials have been spent on the packaging. Why does it arise? There is a series of factors. For instance, the preference of us. When going shopping, all of us prefer to select something looks nice because of the nature of being crazy about beauty. In accordance with that, manufacturers pay more attention to the packaging and make it much more fascinating to attract customers. So goods been wrapped more brilliant than ever before, it is a must. But what is its root? Another factor, our wage growths. It makes us have enough ability to buy something we like. Of course, there are some other factors. Personally, in common with the public, I am fond of goods with attractive packaging. But it does not mean I go for the excess packaging which stands for wastes and consumes a lot of resources, there is no necessary. And it has made so much pollution and is hard to handle. The excess packaging, it should have been refused. Let us appeal others to concern about the real good rather than its packaging.
