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In my opinion the most interesting place in my hometown is the forest which like a wave in the sea. And I would like to take my friend to see. At the spring begin, the village that is surrounded by a greatest mountains. From a long distance see it as if made you enter into a fairyland. All over the ground have start with all kinds of flowers which has different colours--the red of cherish, the white of plum and so on. Following with it is summer. The sunlight penetrates the trees leave behind the odd shape of shadows. And the cicada singing from day to night until the season end. Then, the forest has arrived in autumn. When you come into the forest you will find you are now in a red world,the leaves have fallen in the ground as well as these standing maples branch have hanged on red leaves and every year a lots of tourists that from far away distance will come there to watching the beautiful scene. At the end of the season is the winter. By the time,the forest has been put on a white cloth. When you see it just not only make you happy when you see the view, but teach you learn from life that keep a pure heart then moves on. To sum up, the forest has a beautiful scene from spring to winter so that when you come to my home the most worth thing is paid a visit to there.
