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I very like him.He like help other people.So many people all like him.And he is outgoing.He have many friend.His results is very good.Teachers like him very much.He always help me.Inpronve my learning.I get ready a good gift for him.And thanks for him.I hope he like my gift and hepply every day.This is my blessing.