高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Play football is my favurate sport . I fall in love with football by chance ,one day ,i catch a football in my way home,and than i play the ball with my friend,and from than on ,i love play football so much .My favurate football star is BH who from UK . I hope i will become a professional football player in the future ,so i aways training with my friends.