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Nowadays the generation gap has become a serious social problem. My parents and I meet the same problem. I think this is because we don’t often have a talk with each other. They often spend more time on their work and don’t have much time to stay with me. As time goes by, we both feel that we don’t have the same topics to talk about. And they care nothing but my study. So I want to tell parents to spend more time with me, get to know me and understand me. And I will show my feelings to my parents because I know they are the ones who love me most in the world. In this way, I think, we can have a better understanding of each other.
