托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句式灵活多变，但文中的句子错误偏多；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

What is a obvious principe that the meaning for participating in sports is worthwhile not only when you win something, but also when you lose, and at the same time, you still will win something which is not found right now, however, it indeed exists in your life. For me as an example, when I lost my exam, was so disappointed and without confident. But changed my mind, the losing exam is another starting for me, make me feel better. The consequence is that I will working hard to pass the exam and obtain more knowledge. So sports is, participating in sports doesn't mean win something, the provoking value is our body become more and more health, at the same time, the society will be harmony and sound.