作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Dear David You can't imagine how excited i am when i know you will come to LanZhou.Let me tell you some still to study Chinese well. First you should read more and more Chinese to improve reading. Next you can watch some Chinese programs.This can make you feel relaxed.You also can listen some Chinese songs to improve your listening. The best wishes to you. Yours ChenQuan