Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,the phenomenon that parents do everything that they children should do occurred in our daily life was serious.In order to improve children's grade,parents are willing to do anything and everything such as wash、delivery、cook and so on.However,parents forget the most important thing that independence is very significant for children's grow. So,for childrens' indepedent,frist,parents should give some household duties to train children's ability of indepedence.Second,parents should provide some mistakes within your control for your children and let them know that they should have a responsibility to afford result that they make mistakes.Last but not least,parents should listen children's thought and problem,and try to understake them and let them solve problem alnoe,meanwhile,sometimes parent could give some suggestions for them when they don't know how to resolve it. If parents do what i suggested,they will find a new aspect of they children.