The table below gives information about the difference between life expectancy and infant morality. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should
1、describe the difference between life expectancy and infant morality
2、possible reasons
3、give your comment
You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.
从句数量偏少;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,且要加强拼写检查。
The Different Life Expectacy and Infant mortality We know the life expectancy and infant mortality is different btween the 1960 and the 1990 from the table.The life expectancy was about 40 years old in 1960 and about 60 years old in 1990. However, the infant mortality was about 200 deaths per 1000 births in 1960 and about 100 deaths per 1000 births in 1990. Why was this difference btween two ages? The reasons are these possible. The first, living level is increasing and increasing, foods is adequet and good, people may take in ample nutrition. The second, level of tracype is growing and growing. People may look a doctor wherever he is ill. In my openion, the different has two faces. The good face is that growing of infant mortality decrease the ache of mother. She has one time the ache only under family plan, the extend of life expectancy let the people of ability can work longer for surciety. The bad face is that the growing of infant mortality in tracype decrease the alternation in better child and worse child. The extend of life expectancy make the older people increasing and increasing. But constantly, this different is better.
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