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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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Nowadays,the phenomenon that parents do everything that they children should do occurred in our daily life was serious.In order to improve children's grade,parents are willing to do anything and everything such as wash、delivery、cook and so on.However,parents forget the most important thing that independence is very significant for children's grow. So,for children's independent,first,parents should give some household duties to train children's ability of independence.Second,parents should provide some mistakes within your control for your children and let them know that they should have a responsibility to afford result that they make mistakes.Last but not least,parents should hear children's thought and problem,and try to understand them and let them solve the problem alone,meanwhile,sometimes parent could give some suggestions for them when they don't know how to resolve it. If parents do what i suggested,they will find a new aspect of they children.

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